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C lose your eyes, and then you
R eally can see what is yours.
E ventually, it will be no material.
A ll you can see is deep within you -
T he deepest soul, your true self -
E ager to strive for loving harmony.
R eally can see what is yours.
E ventually, it will be no material.
A ll you can see is deep within you -
T he deepest soul, your true self -
E ager to strive for loving harmony.
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I tried out some new form of poetry. In the horizontal row I have chose a word with six letters. To each of these capital letters I have written a horizontal line with six words.
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Well you chose a very good topic ... imagination.
The method of presentation is quite novel and fun in a way ... I might actually try it too <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="397" title=" (Razz)"/>as for the content I like the simplicity of it quite a bit ... It's always delightful when someone takes a very solid topic and presents it so simply that it seems almost effortless.
the last two lines I really liked in particular.
but saying all that I kind of had a hard time seeing how creativity is linked to the content it strikes me as more like a commentary on depths of the inner self or most proximally to the title maybe imagination in a way...
A good poem and a good presentation ... in my opinion the word creative misfits but that's just a personal opinion anyway