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I just wanted to see you again, my old friend of childhood days.
I had so many things to say to you
And knew that you would understand me.
Already as a little girl I visited you
With all my problems.
I felt safe with you
And all grief flew away.
When I was weeping in your arm,
You have caressed my hair
With your green leaves,
My old friend.


Today you fell!
I came too late.
You will never sway in the wind again.
You have to lie chopped by the wayside.
Some passers-by do not respect the rest of life
And tear at your green boughs
Which bend to the earth, dying.
Who will give me the peace now
That I found in your shade?
I have lost my best friend
Who connected me to my childhood.


Soon a house made of glas and stone will grow
Where you have been chopped.
Soon grey walls will tower, there,
Where you lie in the sunshine.
Perhaps a miracle will happen?
I will wait for it secretly.
Perhaps in front of the house will bloom a garden
And my tree will come to life again.
But then he will be weak and small
And even when many years will have passed
He will nevermore be the same.
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Homage to one of my tree friends.
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~Drakmanka Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I had just such a tree friend. but then we moved and he stayed in our old front yard. I still drive by from time to time, to admire my old friend as he grows into the giant he deserves to be.
at least my tree is still alive :meow:
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Mood: Love *Malintra-Shadowmoon Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful, I wish you still a long time together with your tree :)
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~Drakmanka Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :meow:
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*Scailyn Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mir stehen Tränen in den Augen. Das ist mit soviel Wärme und Zärtlichkeit geschrieben. Und durch die Trauer leuchtet bereits ein Funken Hoffnung auf die Wiederkehr allen Lebens.
Ich kann das so gut mitempfinden, war mir doch selbst ein Baum über viele Jahre der Kindheit, die einzige Freundin, die ich hatte. Meine Vertraute, die meine Seele kannte, als die Menschen um mich herum mir mehr als fremd waren...

Bäume sind so wunderbare Wesen. Und auch ihre Seelen finden in dieser Welt immer wieder zu neuem Leben. Und wenn es soweit ist, werdet ihr einander erkennen...:-)
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Vielen Dank für deinen Kommentar.

Da hast du Recht. Bäume sind zumindest viel berechenbarer als Menschen. Und alles Leben bleibt existent, weil es nicht stofflich ist. Es gibt so viele Baumfreunde, die ich später gerne einmal wiedersehen möchte :)
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*Scailyn Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nicht nur berechenbarer, auch ehrlicher und sanftmütiger. Und wenn es so sein soll, daß du sie wiedersiehst, dann wird es auch so sein:-)
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Comments and feelings are welcome :)
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