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Literature
Our Mother
Green is her clothing
Pure to the soul, heart of gold
Giving is her thing
Literature
Artemis
My twin
is the sun,
and I am the moon.
He grew up,
I stayed young.
So I hunted
next to my deer.
Kept maidens safe,
under my watchful eye.
They pledge their loyalty,
under the moon.
Just like them,
my lunar sisters.
With our similar
moonlit silver hair,
we always stand out.
Two Goddesses,
and one Titanes.
But I hunt alone,
with my bow and arrow.
Until they call me,
my lunar sisters.
Literature
i. on making peace with my mother
i. on making peace with my mother
i feel as though i must first apologize for how i entered; half-breath and whole-fisted, twisted and silent. a bundle of burdens taken away on steel wings. oh, how you worried, writhed and wept. went to a world of neon cages and man-made suns to see the thing you had created, kept company by contraptions and doubt. to see the the fruits of your labour laid out, signing papers and putting your flesh and blood in the slick hands of strangers. you ate uncertainty for breakfast and anguish for lunch.
i spent the early years of my career commanding questions, marching them from my belly to my tongue, appetite un
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1.) Contribution I to WhisperMeWish's ELEMENTS Contest, Link Contest-ELEMENTS
Included element: Earth
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2.) This is my submission to the GetWatchers Spring Art Challenge.
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3.) This is my contribution to PoetryParadise's May Contest: Mother
Included element: Earth
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2.) This is my submission to the GetWatchers Spring Art Challenge.
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3.) This is my contribution to PoetryParadise's May Contest: Mother
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sharpen, not sharpens
She is both mother and creator, not she is mother and creator in one.
Hmm, it had aspects of a hymn in it. The ending made it feel that way. All things considered, that's more or less what I can say for now regarding your poem. It had a few errors, but the sentiment is clear and comprehensive. The use of the ending was well thought out too.
I think that you've done a good job with this poem
She is both mother and creator, not she is mother and creator in one.
Hmm, it had aspects of a hymn in it. The ending made it feel that way. All things considered, that's more or less what I can say for now regarding your poem. It had a few errors, but the sentiment is clear and comprehensive. The use of the ending was well thought out too.
I think that you've done a good job with this poem