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I imagine a world
With slopes, green meadows
With little huts in the vast garden
With little children watering plants
Which are waiting for rain in the sun.
They do what pleases to them.

I imagine a world
With a yellow beach at a blue sea
With colourful fishes and white mussels.
The children come here to play.
They are lying in the warm sand and snuggle up.
They play like it pleases to them.

I imagine a world
With a green, cool forest
With small birds and colourful feathers.
The children's song echoes through the trees.
None of them knows the word "sorrow".
They sing what pleases to them.

I imagine a world
Where only children exist
In all colours and all are small.
None of them knows the word "war".
None of them will ever grow up.
They stay as it pleases to them.

I imagine a world
With hills, with gardens, with flowers and trees;
With forest, with sea, with birds and meadows.
With small and large people who dream
Of joy, of love and of paradise.
They live as it pleases to the universe.
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How a perfect world should be like. The dream of a better world.
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~adventwinter Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's so sweet... but somehow sad...
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It is easy to achieve as it costs nothing or only little. But on the other hand it is very likely to fade, very fragile, because people are so dependent on so many things except their own selves. They give themselves up for some material that won't last. That cost also little, only the "you".

It is adorable but can be lost or seems far away. That is what makes it sweet and sad at one time.

A little late but not forgotten: Many thanks for your comment and your feelings :)
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~adventwinter Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes.. that is very true. I wish it weren't, but it is. At the least, I wish I didn't believe it, but I do. Maybe it's because I'm just a dreamer.

You're welcome. And thank YOU for the explanation and for writing this :heart:
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~NoSuchThingAsSin Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's really heart-touching. Really.
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot for your comment. It is just something like the ideal way of life (should be) :)
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~NoSuchThingAsSin Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, it should. Even as adults, we should know well enough to stay away from things that destroy our universal peace of mind. You would figure we would at least learn something from all those years of childhood.
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~dogyjoe Jul 6, 2012   General Artist
I just read your poem and it is quite amazing, It sounds like a Utopia, but it is not impossible. It can be true, real just need to give as much thought and possible. Thank you for sharing :pray:
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome. Glad you like it :)
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~dogyjoe Jul 6, 2012   General Artist
I do, it's quite good.
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~JustAGirlWithAPen Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Where'd you get the picture? Looks like the Smoky Mtns.
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