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Speak sister,
Talk in the ancient language,
Let us hear you rush,
Oh, river-music, awake!

Speak brother,
Tell us your tidings,
The old and the new,
Oh, stormwind, let you hear!

Speak siblings,
You wise old,
Creak and groan your lament,
Oh, trees of all woods!

Hark, human, listen
To wind and sea roaring,
To the sound of the leaves
And to the song of deciduous trees!

Hark, human, listen
To Mother Nature's choirs.
Sing with them again
Time-honoured songs!
The language of Mother Earth
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is indeed the language of Mother Earth. What I love is the humanist approach in this poem. It doesn't need any correction from my point of view, and I find that your approach has really worked wonders in this poem. Well done.
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Malintra-Shadowmoon Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot, shehroze. :hug:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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mjponso Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Is it any reason why there is a figure of speech that tells us to stop and smell the roses from time to time? There is a beautifully-choreographed world all around us and it's all too easy to miss it as we get caught up in the busyness of our lives.
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Ultima228 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Tis a nice poem for sure. Meaningful with a hint of something else in it. And well written. Kudo's :+fav:
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Malintra-Shadowmoon Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for your comment.
You can well read behind the lines :)
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Ultima228 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wouldn't be a good writer myself if I couldn't read between the lines. As a hopeful author I pride myself a bit on it
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Malintra-Shadowmoon Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Comments and feelings are welcome :)
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