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Eternal wood with thousands of tree-tops,
In your halls dwells peace.
With your incessant rustle
You still the longing of my heart.

In silent devotion, the mouth must
Fail there miserably.
Only bird-singing has here the right
To beat the time.

Each tree loves its neighbour,
Together they carry the weight.
Caress each other tenderly with the branches,
Hugs themselves when they like.

For how many animals do you offer
A safe habitat?
For how many flowers do you care
Which trust blindly your protection?

Eternal wood with thousands of tree-tops,
Mother Earth may preserve you.
At all times and forever
You should develop yourself freely.
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Questions to the forest and the beauty of its living.
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:iconebonsong:
Almost sounds like a prayer to Nature. :)
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, in some way it is :)
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Mood: Love ~CreeppingDeath Apr 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
nice!
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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~RasberryHiyata Sep 12, 2012  Student Filmographer
This is a very nice poem. It definitely stirred my latent feelings of wanting to explore and just relax in a wooded area.

I really wish I could meld and bend words to make such refreshing feelings in poetry. I'm good at writing short stories or novels, but I've never been able to write a nice poem outside of haiku's. My wording tends to be too blunt. :c
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Probably it works because the trees and me are one ^^

By the way I am very bad at drawing. And concerning writing I prefer poetry and even non-fiction essays to novels or short stories. Sometimes my poems are narrative and thus make them little short stories but real novels....
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Comments and feelings are welcome :)
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