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I have a dream
Of another world
Where no-one resembles the other.
But where all are one
In a world of diversity
That plants every flower at the right spot.

I dream of a world
Where hate is unknown
Either among individuals or the great nations.
There is only the appreciation of the others' life
At all their places.

I dream of a great sign
That will re-unite in joy
All once scattered.
Brother will not be angry with brother anymore
And everybody understands
That living is now the new dimension.

I see a new world
Where shining light nets
Spread like a shield across the Earth
From east to west and from south to north.

I dream of a world
That has forgotten the old one
With all the insanity and fury -
In which all humans have been purified.
And chastened in real humility
They stand up and move forward.

In this world
True love will
Seize again the hearts of humanity.
Men and elves -
Together we will cure every wound
That we once stroke ourselves
and our world in limitless rage.

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Time to open hearts and minds for mutual understanding and respect of others :)
Time to heal wounds and move closer, time to help and to support each other :)

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Hello, I am from :iconthecritiquables: with my critique on this piece.

"Elven hope". I like the way you have (after having read quite a few of your works) defined what elves and such creatures signify in your works. And I personally feel that is quite an achievement.

I loved the meaning behind this work. It is so well handled and there was this strange feeling of hope that I felt while reading this - it was as if I was imagining such a world for a moment and that rarely happens. Meaning, you portrayed a somewhat perfect world but it didn't seem absurd. It was apparent that you are wishing, hoping for it. That is what made it beautiful.

There was no technical aspect that I would discuss in this work. Over all a good job and a soothing work.
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*Gewalgon 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I do not often read english literature, because it's not my mother language.
But the title seemed to me very interesting...

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
I share the same hope with you.

And I believe, the day will come, the day where people live in peace and harmony with all beings of the world and the nature.
Yes, I believe with my whole heart :heart: and whole soul! :snowflake:
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for your comment. It isn't my native language either but I mostly write in English.

Everybody is important in the universe and has a task to fullfill to change the now into tomorrow. But everybody has also one or some personal special tasks. One of mine is to conwey messages and meanings in my works out of different reasons - to make people think, to give hope, to help, to make the unseen visible, the unbelievable believable :)

Thanks for reading this poem and sharing your thoughts and heart :)
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*Gewalgon 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Habe zu spät bemerkt dass du ja offenbar auch aus Deutschland kommst.
Mach weiter so!
Ich hoffe deine Botschaften werden viele Menschenherzen erreichen, so wie meine! :-)
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Kein Problem. Ich versuche mein Bestes.
Das wünsche ich dir auf jeden Fall auch :)
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*Gewalgon 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Danke! :shamrock:
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Bitte :heart:
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Mood: Love =TheGalleryOfEve Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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*Malintra-Shadowmoon Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot for the feature :hug:
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=TheGalleryOfEve Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconaawplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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*allison731 Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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