I have a dream Of another world Where no-one resembles the other. But where all are one In a world of diversity That plants every flower at the right spot.
I dream of a world Where hate is unknown Either among individuals or the great nations. There is only the appreciation of the others' life At all their places.
I dream of a great sign That will re-unite in joy All once scattered. Brother will not be angry with brother anymore And everybody understands That living is now the new dimension.
I see a new world Where shining light nets Spread like a shield across the Earth From east to west and from south to north.
I dream of a world That has forgotten the old one With all the insanity and fury - In which all humans have been purified. And chastened in real humility They stand up and move forward.
In this world True love will Seize again the hearts of humanity. Men and elves - Together we will cure every wound That we once stroke ourselves and our world in limitless rage.
Time to open hearts and minds for mutual understanding and respect of others Time to heal wounds and move closer, time to help and to support each other
"Elven hope". I like the way you have (after having read quite a few of your works) defined what elves and such creatures signify in your works. And I personally feel that is quite an achievement.
I loved the meaning behind this work. It is so well handled and there was this strange feeling of hope that I felt while reading this - it was as if I was imagining such a world for a moment and that rarely happens. Meaning, you portrayed a somewhat perfect world but it didn't seem absurd. It was apparent that you are wishing, hoping for it. That is what made it beautiful.
There was no technical aspect that I would discuss in this work. Over all a good job and a soothing work.
I do not often read english literature, because it's not my mother language. But the title seemed to me very interesting...
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. I share the same hope with you.
And I believe, the day will come, the day where people live in peace and harmony with all beings of the world and the nature. Yes, I believe with my whole heart and whole soul!
Thanks for your comment. It isn't my native language either but I mostly write in English.
Everybody is important in the universe and has a task to fullfill to change the now into tomorrow. But everybody has also one or some personal special tasks. One of mine is to conwey messages and meanings in my works out of different reasons - to make people think, to give hope, to help, to make the unseen visible, the unbelievable believable
Thanks for reading this poem and sharing your thoughts and heart
Habe zu spät bemerkt dass du ja offenbar auch aus Deutschland kommst. Mach weiter so! Ich hoffe deine Botschaften werden viele Menschenherzen erreichen, so wie meine!
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"Elven hope". I like the way you have (after having read quite a few of your works) defined what elves and such creatures signify in your works. And I personally feel that is quite an achievement.
I loved the meaning behind this work. It is so well handled and there was this strange feeling of hope that I felt while reading this - it was as if I was imagining such a world for a moment and that rarely happens. Meaning, you portrayed a somewhat perfect world but it didn't seem absurd. It was apparent that you are wishing, hoping for it. That is what made it beautiful.
There was no technical aspect that I would discuss in this work. Over all a good job and a soothing work.
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