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Elven Hope

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I have a dream
Of another world
Where no-one resembles the other.
But where all are one
In a world of diversity
That plants every flower at the right spot.

I dream of a world
Where hate is unknown
Either among individuals or the great nations.
There is only the appreciation of the others' life
At all their places.

I dream of a great sign
That will re-unite in joy
All once scattered.
Brother will not be angry with brother anymore
And everybody understands
That living is now the new dimension.

I see a new world
Where shining light nets
Spread like a shield across the Earth
From east to west and from south to north.

I dream of a world
That has forgotten the old one
With all the insanity and fury -
In which all humans have been purified.
And chastened in real humility
They stand up and move forward.

In this world
True love will
Seize again the hearts of humanity.
Men and elves -
Together we will cure every wound
That we once stroke ourselves
and our world in limitless rage.
Time to open hearts and minds for mutual understanding and respect of others :)
Time to heal wounds and move closer, time to help and to support each other :)
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Hello, I am from <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/h/t…" alt=":iconthecritiquables:" title="TheCritiquables" /> with my critique on this piece.

"Elven hope". I like the way you have (after having read quite a few of your works) defined what elves and such creatures signify in your works. And I personally feel that is quite an achievement.

I loved the meaning behind this work. It is so well handled and there was this strange feeling of hope that I felt while reading this - it was as if I was imagining such a world for a moment and that rarely happens. Meaning, you portrayed a somewhat perfect world but it didn't seem absurd. It was apparent that you are wishing, hoping for it. That is what made it beautiful.

There was no technical aspect that I would discuss in this work. Over all a good job and a soothing work.